Mr. Kat worked at home yesterday and turned out to be very helpful. (This is not always the case with sigother working at home situations.) I’ve been trying to figure out why the clockwork story is having so many problems and I finally realized it had no driving conflict. So I had a nice chat with the hubster and we came up with a rather nifty conflict and plot driver that should make the story start running much better.
But first: the rewrites.